Dragon Ball Super Ep. 123 suffered from a number of problems
in what could have otherwise been a strong episode. The most glaring problem
was the animation. Episode 122 had some of the best animation of the series
while episode 123 goes back to some of Super’s most generic. But beyond the
superficial there were more serious problems with the writing. I understand
that not everyone shares my feelings on this episode, but I think it’s worth
exploring how it could have been vastly improved.
Fixing the animation would be a simple manner of putting one
of their better animators in charge or giving the team more time to get
everything right. Budget is often not as big a concern as the skill level and
the time given to the animators involved. Toei should reserve that level of
animation for nonaction scenes and comedic episodes. Really it shouldn’t be
there at all but there are practical reasons why Toei probably will not improve
much.
While fixing the animation is simply a matter of skill and
effort, the writing was a bigger problem. The draw of this episode was supposed
to be Vegeta’s new transformation, a new power unique to him. Unfortunately
this is far from the focus of the episode.
Goku actually dominates most of the episode and it doesn’t foreshadow
Vegeta’s transformation all. Once he transforms we are told how much stronger he is, and both he and Goku team up against
Jiren, which slightly puts him on the defensive.
A better solution would be to have Vegeta, who Jiren took
down in the last episode, watching Goku, from the ground, and reflecting on how
he has once again fallen behind. As Jiren beats Goku back he should start to
lose hope while remembering his promise to Cabba. It’s only then that his stubbornness
should kick back in and he starts his transformation. The episode should end on his making a
decisive blow on Jiren, demonstrating his new power.
This would have been much more satisfying. New
transformations in Dragon Ball have often been accompanied by emotional
breakdowns. By having Vegeta confront the pending end to his universe and the
blow to his honor and pride we would have some foreshadowing for the
transformation to follow based on established series tropes. They should have stretched
out the transformation scene to put on a show of light and yelling, which
doesn’t sound like much but would connect it once again to past
transformations. Having Vegeta then strike a powerful blow against Jiren would
allow no doubt that he is now is a higher league and would end the episode on a
strong note. You could do whatever you wanted next week. Have Goku and Vegeta
fight together, have Jiren curb stomp him again but this time actually trying,
but Vegeta’s new transformation would still be established as an important
spike in his power.
At least in terms of the writing, I don’t think these
changes would have been that difficult. There are of course time and budget
concerns that can hold back improvements in animation, but given the series
popularity I think they are also reasonable.
-Gedaemon